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Macavity
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Fri May 03, 2024 3:40 am

I have a poem appearing here...


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CalebPerry
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Sat May 04, 2024 2:56 am

Congratulations, Phil. It's not a bad poem. I understand it!
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Sat May 04, 2024 4:47 am

Cheers Caleb.
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Sun May 05, 2024 9:22 am

I remember that poem, very good. I was seeing "where youth displays its wares."
I'm out of faith and in my cups
I contemplate such bitter stuff.
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Sun May 05, 2024 10:13 am

Cheers Ray. Yes, that was the thought.
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