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ray miller
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Wed Mar 29, 2023 9:04 am

I'm out of faith and in my cups
I contemplate such bitter stuff.
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Wed Mar 29, 2023 9:32 am

Lovely. Thanks for sharing!

Cheers,
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Wed Mar 29, 2023 9:49 am

Nice one Ray. Congrats.

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Wed Mar 29, 2023 7:51 pm

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Fri Mar 31, 2023 11:47 pm

This packs a punch, Ray. Congratulations! I'm not surprised it was picked up - it's the kind of poem that stays on your mind.

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Sat Apr 01, 2023 7:06 pm

Good one, Ray. There's something about "conga" as a rhyming word that always makes me smile. Worked here too (along with all the other rhymes).

Good to read that bio of yours again. It is a corker.

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Wed Apr 05, 2023 10:44 am

Thanks, David. The bio is better than the poem, really. But if Villa keep winning I might have to change it.
I'm out of faith and in my cups
I contemplate such bitter stuff.
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Fri Apr 07, 2023 8:30 am

Many congrats Ray. Much enjoyed, especially that final couplet.

Cheers,

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Thu Apr 20, 2023 4:48 pm

ray miller wrote:
Wed Apr 05, 2023 10:44 am
But if Villa keep winning I might have to change it.
I have been thinking that lately!
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