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Sun Jan 15, 2023 10:06 pm

Hello!

Happy to report that both Martin (aka Miles) and I have two poems published in issue 04, out today. Here's a link to the front page: https://pulsebeatpoetry.com/pulsebeat-04/

Many thanks to everyone who assisted with my poems :D

Bw,
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Mon Jan 16, 2023 3:38 am

Very nice poems! You are single-handedly bringing meter and rhyme back to life, Fliss.

And thank you for alerting me to the existence of that journal. I think I can dredge up a couple melodic poems they might like.

What is Miles' or Martin's screen name here on P.A.T.?
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Mon Jan 16, 2023 6:55 am

Lovely poems Fliss, and great to read Martin's work again.

Congratulations

Phil🎉🍾
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Mon Jan 16, 2023 6:59 am

Many congratulations, Fliss and Martin! Fliss, you are at ease in rhyme and meter as always!

Cheers,
John
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Mon Jan 16, 2023 4:17 pm

Hi Fliss. I love both of your poems. The playful depiction of the tropical storm is quite fun. Congrats!

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Mon Jan 16, 2023 11:26 pm

Thank yous, Caleb, Phil, John, Miles 🙂👍

Caleb, that's very kind of you, thanks! You're welcome for the alert; I think it would be well worth your submitting for the next issue. And here's Miles just above this post, Miles T. Ranter, an anagram :lol:

MacPhil, ta muchly! I agree it's good to read Martin again 🤩

John, woo-hoo, thank-coo! That's a very generous observation there (^v^)

Miles, thank you! I had a lot of fun writing 'Eunice', having asked Dad to explain how tropical storms are formed. He hasn't seen the poem, though; I think it might be a bit much for him :lol:

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