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Wed Dec 14, 2022 9:49 am

I have one appearing here

https://borderlessjournal.com/2022/12/1 ... phil-wood/

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Wed Dec 14, 2022 9:54 am

Congatulations! A very nice epistle.

Cheers,
John
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Cheers John!
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Wed Dec 14, 2022 12:53 pm

Oh my, that's a really nice poem. I really like it. Nicely done.

You are being direct and honest -- not trying to be obscure. The sincerity is palpable. It's just what I like.
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If I don't critique your poem, it is probably because I don't understand it.
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Wed Dec 14, 2022 1:52 pm

Many congrats Phil! Much enjoyed.

Cheers,

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Wed Dec 14, 2022 4:40 pm

Cheers Caleb and Tristan. Pleased you enjoyed.

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Wed Dec 14, 2022 10:16 pm

Hooray! Hearty congrats, MacPhil :D

I think I remember this one; was it workshopped here? I just remember a few of the lines, almost word for word, spookily :shock: :lol:

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Thu Dec 15, 2022 3:42 am

Cheers Fliss. Obviously a very haunting poem Fliss🤣

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Sat Dec 17, 2022 9:38 pm

Haunting indeed, MacGhost :lol:

Does this form of poem have a name, by the way? Just spotted the repetitions 🤔

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Mon Dec 19, 2022 9:17 pm

Probably Fliss, though I can't remember 🤔🤣
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Mon Dec 19, 2022 10:15 pm

We'll have to invent a term, MacPhil! 😂
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