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ray miller
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Wed Apr 27, 2022 4:17 pm

I'm out of faith and in my cups
I contemplate such bitter stuff.
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Wed Apr 27, 2022 8:34 pm

Congratulations Ray. Lovely poetry.
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Thu Apr 28, 2022 3:44 pm

Seconded.
ray miller
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Fri Apr 29, 2022 8:00 am

Thanks again.
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I contemplate such bitter stuff.
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Sat Apr 30, 2022 11:57 am

Congratulations to you, Ray! These are very good, I like the amusing author's note, too!
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Mon May 02, 2022 8:59 am

Thanks, Lia. I live in dread that one day my wife will discover that amusing author's note.
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I contemplate such bitter stuff.
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