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Macavity
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Wed Jan 05, 2022 5:06 pm

My collaboration with a friend...

https://feversofthemind.com/2022/01/05/ ... otography/

I would be interested in knowing which of the collaborative works delivers most for the reader/viewer.

all the best

Phil
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Wed Jan 05, 2022 8:10 pm

Hello MacPhil,

Congrats again! You are 'smashing it', as some might say :)

My favourite is 'Pod', I think. I like the contrasting colours and textures in the photo, and how these are brought out in your poem 👍

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Fliss

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Wed Jan 05, 2022 8:45 pm

Looks like a healthy beverage :D

And thank you for the feedback. I shall pass on :D

All the best

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Thu Jan 06, 2022 8:52 pm

It surely is, MacPhil! It looks like my special vegetable soup, in fact, which, thrillingly, you can read about here, https://www.meritene.co.uk/product/ener ... table-soup :)

Yes, do pass on the feedback. I'm wondering whether I should attempt collaboration with photographer Bro Lego 🙃

Bw,
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Fri Jan 07, 2022 6:22 am

It would be great if you and Bro did Fliss. Creative magic😀
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Fri Jan 07, 2022 7:12 pm

Hi Phil,

Congrats again. My favourite poem out of the three is ‘Mesmerised’ (I remember it too). But my favourite collaborative work and photo is ‘Puddlework’. The photo’s great, and the poem and photo enhance one another more than I felt the other two did.

Enjoyed.

Cheers,

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Great Tristan. This was a taster effort. So your feedback is much appreciated.

Cheers

Phil
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