Jellyfish Whispers

[Macavity]

I have a couple here

http://www.jellyfishwhispers.com/

Unfortunately the word 'bite' has not been copied on to their site correctly, which is an important word in the poem (or perhaps an editor decision - she used 'bit'). Mailed her, but no response. These things happen.

all the best

mac

[Antcliff]

Especially liked the Gull poem, Mac. Nice blend of content and form?

[Ros]

Well done. Agree that bite is better than bit!

Ros

[Macavity]

Thanks Ros and Seth. David gave me a pointer on the Gull poem.

all the best

mac

[Magpie Jane]

Lovely poems, Mac. Yes, I too say, especially the Gull.
Congrats!
Keep flying (swimming, biting) -

Jane

[Macavity]

Thanks MJ. More likely to nibble and paddle

all the best

mac

[KevJ]

Three good one's Mac. See what you mean about bite.

All the best Kev

[Macavity]

Cheers Kev!