New Challenge

Beat writers' block here.
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Wed Jun 12, 2013 12:08 pm

Enjoying these still.....
...keep it up people!
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Fri Jun 14, 2013 7:41 pm

State of the Nation

in those days I worked
all the hours God sent
sometimes a few more but
in those days I worked

One flew over

Jack Nicholson in drag for some reason
haunts her dreams
if only she could find a way
back to David Niven

End times

a thing, another thing
one fucking thing after another
ad nauseum and et sequentia until
the day when there is not

Emergency Protocols

in the event
of no safe course and no safe exit
search your boss's office
for the drinks cabinet key
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Fri Jun 14, 2013 7:49 pm

bolder now, dust sneaks
across the furniture, steals
the gloss you cherished

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Sat Jun 15, 2013 10:36 am

Three inspired by Tesco's this morning:

Spooky

Michael Jackson's ghost
appears to have appeared
to Lionel Richie says The Sun.
I wonder if he dictated a song?

Choice

a miserable man
oblivious in the aisle
stumped by ginger-nuts it seems
all hope of tea and biscuits dead

Drive

that your engine won't keep running
it's not so bad a thing
given that
your steering is approximate at best

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does anybody else find it hard counting words instead of beats?
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Sun Jun 16, 2013 6:38 pm

Ian (+Ros), enjoyed these...
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Thu Jun 20, 2013 6:08 am

Jalisco

The sun distends, pinkens, and disappears;
the waiter brings more lime,
salt,
beers.
fine words butter no parsnips
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Thu Jun 20, 2013 12:57 pm

Spanner

Wipe the pipe and tighten
the bolt on the pipe on the loo
wait five minutes--still damp--
tighter, tighter...
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Tue Jul 16, 2013 9:47 pm

These are all rather good.
The only downside is Ian's dodgy plumbing (not that mine is any better..)
Instead of just sitting on the fence - why not stand in the middle of the road?
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Wed Jul 17, 2013 12:07 am

Rice

Grains we pounded wafer thin for our fall picnic
were even then on chartreuse spikes
being harvested in the swamp.

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Wed Jul 17, 2013 1:24 pm

twoleftfeet wrote:These are all rather good.
The only downside is Ian's dodgy plumbing (not that mine is any better..)
Ditto :D

Good to see you doing this as well, Jackie.
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