Unconscious Dreaming

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blueknight
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Sat Sep 04, 2004 3:23 pm

Cadreing skulls
brain caccooning.
Trapped butterflies
clandestine screaming.
Tortured souls glisten
solar meteorites thundering.
Lunar lightening flashes
silhouetted great oaks,
know something.
Mind bending round
a squillion transient stars.
Hallucenogenic entrancing
frantically altering,
skulls igniting.

Endemic pendulum's frenetic
concepts of space and time,
black and fading.
A neurotic feeling
of ravenous forboding.
Head can't get around
this unconscious dreaming.
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