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Like it. Don't feel you need the end line punctuation, too neat. Like the font play in the title.
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Thu Mar 14, 2024 4:27 am

I agree with Phil across the board.

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Love it

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Counting the beats,
Counting the slow heart beats,
The bleeding to death of time in slow heart beats,
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Sat Mar 16, 2024 6:09 pm

Thanks guys.

I think you may be right about the punctuation. It seemed to make sense on the page, but when creating graphics, things change.

I'm updating my website and I'm finding creating images allows for much more flexibility in the structure and format, almost like cheating.

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