A stranded vision, buoyant on deep green,
transferring weight from blade to blade
his effortless spirals cricking my neck
following his perfecting form:
Correcting angles, squaring hips
centring the trunk
he’s gone!
Now I’m lost.
He’s blended
transcended
become one
shifted self
eternal, internal
alchemist,
tamed his heart
reached his God
in a park
in a city
on a wet
Wednesday.
Perfect Tai Chi in the Park
Nice piece, I would start from the "correcting angles" line because that's when the action starts, and for no other reason. Preambles suck, generally
Tony
Tony
Counting the beats,
Counting the slow heart beats,
The bleeding to death of time in slow heart beats,
Wakeful they lie.
Robert Graves
Counting the slow heart beats,
The bleeding to death of time in slow heart beats,
Wakeful they lie.
Robert Graves