Ash Wednesday

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jisbell00
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Ash Wednesday


Some Lenten season. In the crisp
dawn light, a ministry begins.
Past echoes future, in a wisp
of dawn air, in our weary sins.

It would be time to break this fast,
but it is not. The visions come.
So, is our death, death at the last?
What lives in this millennium?

The Son of Man takes up the cross
that He will hang on. In His cup:
rejection, sacrifice, and loss.
The heart goes out. The gaze goes up.
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In the crisp
dawn light, a ministry begins.
Like that John, a pleasing echo of this opening line...

https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/ ... t-midnight
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Mon Jan 01, 2024 8:34 pm

Hi Phil,

Thanks for recalling that great poem. It ends like this as well:

Or if the secret ministry of frost
Shall hang them up in silent icicles,
Quietly shining to the quiet Moon.

Cheers,
John
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