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Wed Oct 06, 2021 12:12 pm

through a slightly open window in our bathroom
a bee escapes
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Wed Oct 06, 2021 2:42 pm

:roll: Fleeing from... :D I have a few images in mind.
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Wed Oct 06, 2021 7:16 pm

Lol, Phil :lol:

This is great, Tristan. I haven't seen a haiku formatted like this before and I'm intrigued! I like bees and I like the wondering my mind performs :)

Best wishes,
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Fri Oct 08, 2021 7:18 am

Thanks Mac. I’m thinking to changing room. :D

Thanks Leaf, really pleased you enjoyed the format and it made your mind wonder.

Cheers,

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Fri Oct 08, 2021 7:38 pm

You're welcome, Tristan. Always good to wonder! :)
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Thu Nov 04, 2021 11:59 pm

I love a good haiku. I like the image in this one. Pretty and warm. Almost like a painting.
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