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Sun Jun 06, 2021 5:13 am

Removed. Sorry.
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Sun Aug 01, 2021 4:40 pm

I liked the title so I was going to read it with a view to comment on it.

Maybe the title could be inspiration for a piece.

My proudest moment, in terms of removal of things, was when I had an advert turned down by a web site. I breed rare breed chickens and had a male for sale. 'The Sun' newspaper used to offer free online advertising and I advertised my male chickens. My advert was removed because it had the word 'cock' in it! :)

Absolutely brilliant.
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Sat Aug 07, 2021 6:58 am

Simply pause
to think of nothing
for a moment.
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