This Can't Be Real (A Rewrite)

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Thu Jan 09, 2020 8:40 pm

Donald Trump my fears is whether you will start world war 3
or even worse another bombing on Iranian generals and corporals,
or being impeached, or writing really dumb tweets on twitter,
don’t you think you have gone too far? Your presidency has
gone too far, you should be out of office soon! The history of
your presidency since 2016 has been a nightmare when Russia
intervened in the election. (though it wasn’t your fault) I
think it is time you should leave the office, yet you clink drinks,
make love to your wife, buy fast food for your family, why?

And though I’ve said it before you should go on and live a
better life for yourself even though you have done so in the
past before you became president, I still think you are crazy
and in need of some therapy but I still wonder to myself how
will I ever know the ethereal side of you, maybe you can be
a god to me, but I don’t think so, you are the black sheep of
the world and that should be the end of it!
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