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Meteor
Yikesy! I like this, MacPhil. That's a very dramatic sky, especially for the reddish notes, which make me think of blood smears. The meteor itself is excellent, I think, just pure fire and fear. The houses look like they're staring at it and the trees appear to be cowering. I wonder where it's going to land...
Best wishes,
Fliss

Best wishes,
Fliss
It sounds terrifying, MacPhil. I'm reminded of the film Melancholia, in which a planet is on course to collide with Earth. I watched that with Bro A and although he was quite cynical about it all, we were both a bit freaked out by it! Cowering slightly
Bw,
Fliss
PS: I'm on my way to 'Skew-whiff'! I've been a bit overwhelmed with work today, but things ought to ease tomorrow


Bw,
Fliss
PS: I'm on my way to 'Skew-whiff'! I've been a bit overwhelmed with work today, but things ought to ease tomorrow

Morning, MacPhil!
Yikesy, I'm just finishing work at 01:30am
(shaky laughter)
You're right about the meteorite experience; at least, it happened to three guinea pigs I know and one of them, Moppet, wrote a poem about it! You can read Moppet's poem here, https://winchcombemeteorite.org/pigs/
I've officially run out of brain for the day, but I'm determined to return and comment on poems soon!
Bw,
Fliss
Yikesy, I'm just finishing work at 01:30am

You're right about the meteorite experience; at least, it happened to three guinea pigs I know and one of them, Moppet, wrote a poem about it! You can read Moppet's poem here, https://winchcombemeteorite.org/pigs/

I've officially run out of brain for the day, but I'm determined to return and comment on poems soon!
Bw,
Fliss
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I guess this is folk art, right? i notice there isn't much movement in the comet, no tail or blur indicating its direction. I also notice that there is atmospheric disturbance above the house, but not around the house. So for me, the painting works as interesting (and ominous) folk art, but doesn't work as a realistic portrayal. However, I do like it.
If you don't like the black theme, it is easy to switch to a lighter color. Just ask me how.
If I don't critique your poem, it is probably because I don't understand it.
If I don't critique your poem, it is probably because I don't understand it.