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NotQuiteSure
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Wed Jan 12, 2022 2:14 pm

Hi mac,
very appealing. Something of the children's story book illustration about it, which I like.
What does the writing on the sign say, I couldn't make it out? :)

Regards, Not

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Wed Jan 12, 2022 8:02 pm

Pleased you liked Not. I've misspelled. So the writing is just scribble🤣

cheers

Phil
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Wed Jan 12, 2022 9:20 pm

I think it's very creative -- bucolic scenes interspersed amidst the infinity of the skies, or what looks like a nebula. The painting speaks to how humans compartmentalize the universe. Nicely done. And with two suns no less.
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Thu Jan 13, 2022 5:20 am

Very pleased you enjoyed Caleb and thank you for that insightful response. Compartmentalizing has been on my mind.

all the best

Phil
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