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Tue Aug 26, 2008 6:14 pm

Today

My brow, it does sustain but just;
while old jackdaw, he chirps a merry feast.
As oaken gladed mulch of life has time;
tied conkers crack their husks.
Fair slow my walk for night has called no beast.
Though in that dark provided place the burrows did give rise.
As dawn with none to answer to, brings right before my eyes.


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to anticipate touching what is unseen seems far more interesting than seeing what the hand can not touch
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