Loco Haiku

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twoleftfeet
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Wed Mar 15, 2006 10:44 am

I've got zilch to say,
so I thought I'd try haiku
and say it in style

Five seven and five -
just seventeen syllables
to sylla-babble

I can't help choking
as this parses through my mouth
heading the wrong way

Forget the counting -
I can talk out of my arse
twenty four/ seven
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Thu Mar 16, 2006 1:19 am

Clever, just clever :wink:
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Thu Mar 16, 2006 11:50 am

What are you doing here? - This could've gone mainline.

good 'un

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Wed Mar 29, 2006 11:32 am

hahahahahahahahaha
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Sun Apr 02, 2006 8:28 am

I like it! Very clever, as aforementioned.
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