The Chatter That I Hear

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jisbell00
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Fri Sep 22, 2023 1:46 am

The Chatter That I Hear


The sort of things you think worth saying are
not things that strike my fancy. I have heard
the same news better put, in fifty-four
years on this planet, and I now prefer
tranquility. The chatter that I hear
around town, in the office, in the home,
is mostly noise. The birds are flying east
this morning, driven by a need I don’t
pretend to fathom, to be over there
instead of here. They don’t speak. But across
the arc of time, they plot a course anew.

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Fri Sep 22, 2023 2:43 am

Its called the wisdom of birds

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Counting the beats,
Counting the slow heart beats,
The bleeding to death of time in slow heart beats,
Wakeful they lie.

Robert Graves
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Fri Sep 22, 2023 4:02 am

Pretty much! Nice phrase.

Cheers,
John
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Fri Sep 22, 2023 7:50 am

Enjoyed John. No doubt the nature and behaviour of birds and humans has parallels. I suspect you know that impulse to travel more than most! news/now/noise/need/anew...nicely threaded.

Bw

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Fri Sep 22, 2023 10:07 am

Thanks Phil - I do have itchy feet! Though we are I think getting ready to settle within a year or so.

Glad you liked the play of alliteration!

Cheers,
John
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