Patterns

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jisbell00
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Fri Sep 15, 2023 12:29 am

Patterns

A field of wheat. The information in
the surface of the ocean. How a crowd,
a flock of birds will ebb and flow. The path
the planets follow in the sky at night.

The play of eligible voters, as
they choose what they desire. The path a moth
will take around a streetlight. Mercury
poured on a kitchen table – or the knit

of DNA, the drift of clouds, the choice
of rain to fall or not. The vast array
of things there are. The patterns that they make.

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Fri Sep 15, 2023 8:22 am

The information in
the surface of the ocean.

Don't quite see that as a pattern, as the rest are.

The play of eligible voters, as
they choose what they desire.

Or what they loathe least
I'm out of faith and in my cups
I contemplate such bitter stuff.
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Fri Sep 15, 2023 9:31 am

Hi Ray,

You raise a fair question. The surface of the ocean is a battleground for three conflicting forces in particular: wind, tide, and current. Those forces are measurable and in those terms, are information. A similar argument can be made for air, which would I think make sense to any bird, perhaps on an instinctual level. They need to recognize an updraft and what it entails.

Your point as to politics is well taken. Though I am perfectly happy to vote for an old union man like Joe Biden over a fascistic lowlife like Donald J. Trump. I would do so repeatedly.

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John
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Fri Sep 15, 2023 8:09 pm

Been dipping into this one during the day John. One to make a reader ponder. Interesting what you say about the ocean. Muchly enjoyed.

Bw

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Fri Sep 15, 2023 8:58 pm

John,

I tried googling Jess Verschoyle expecting her to be a politician and I found a Goldman Sachs employee?

The poem reminded me a bit of Everyday Eclipses by Roger McGough so that poem might be worth taking a look at if you don't know it.

I like the idea of patterns in everything. I think you could probably add to this, end in a flurry and with something profound to tie it all together. At the moment it ends a bit too quick for me but I like where you're going and the idea.

The mention of politics is only very brief and then that thought dominates and I was half expecting a reappearance of the political. I'd either develop it or lose it.
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Fri Sep 15, 2023 11:16 pm

Hi Morph,

Just an acquaintance. Her name's a distraction so I've deleted it.

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John
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Sat Sep 16, 2023 6:11 am

Hi Morph,

I'd not known that Roger McGough poem, but I quite like his work. Thanks for the heads-up! His is a bit verbose for me, but why not after all?

I like to have the play of eligible voters in here. Patterns are at the core of political philosophy, particularly in democracies. It's the natural world and the man-made world, and how they interact or parallel each other.

Glad you enjoyed it!

Cheers,
John
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