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dinosaurs anew
populate the old playground
with T-Rex T-shirts
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with T-Rex T-shirts
coders build a better world
geeks will save us all
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geeks will save us all
by adding up correctly
and paying taxes
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and paying taxes
thus lies the demagogue
slavery accounts
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slavery accounts
to be written into texts
studied for exams
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studied for exams
count angels on a pin head
graduate fan fiction
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graduate fan fiction
becomes stone and glass, kneeling
is an investment
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is an investment
is love, not a found object
compound interest
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compound interest
for validation is how
much money you make
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much money you make
to win the game in progress
what memories made
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what memories made
swimming that river border
because it was there
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because it was there
keep calm hide stash in pocket
exchange of profit
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exchange of profit
in leaf and root and branches
promises of blossom
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promises of blossom
the child feeds from the parent
mothers bones wither
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mothers bones withered
but not their tongues that lusted
with tasty gossip
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with tasty gossip
hes the life of the party
the old school fake news
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the old school fake news
muscles through leaf mould compost
hisses clouds of spores
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hisses clouds of spores
oneness no more required
now unthinking bliss
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now unthinking bliss
frenzied under forest mulch
these crawling things feast
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these crawling things feast
Inject stinger into brain
make zombie of pest
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make zombie of pest
so he marries her and she
bakes apple crumble
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bakes apple crumble
just some arsenic a day
seeds for widow days
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seeds for widow days
in trays that promise a spring
the robin enjoys
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the robin enjoys
her second and final spring
the last clutch of eggs
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the last clutch of eggs
will bring fresh forest voices
wakes a sleepy mole
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