Haiku Train
Good for chewing too
preferably after dark,
fangs aint what they used to be.
Edit: I've messed up. Which has led to Pauline messing up. My fault entirely. I finished my last line with seven syllables instead of five...I'm a twit.
Can I change the last line to 'with my dentures in'?
preferably after dark,
fangs aint what they used to be.
Edit: I've messed up. Which has led to Pauline messing up. My fault entirely. I finished my last line with seven syllables instead of five...I'm a twit.
Can I change the last line to 'with my dentures in'?
Last edited by Boat on Sun Jun 26, 2016 10:48 pm, edited 2 times in total.
What the hell do I know about poetry?
Goldfish swims in bowl
each time he passes a rock
says that's a surprise
each time he passes a rock
says that's a surprise
All that I had I brought,
Little enough I know;
A poor rhyme roughly wrought,
A rose to match thy snow:
All that I had I brought.
(Ernest Dowson 1867 - 1900)
Little enough I know;
A poor rhyme roughly wrought,
A rose to match thy snow:
All that I had I brought.
(Ernest Dowson 1867 - 1900)
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remembrance condemns
wisteria
glares mauve ~
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I placed my frizzante trust.
It's piss poor vino.
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deciduous signs, beware
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the three bears construct
a grisly house.
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a grisly house.
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