second skin

[Firebird]

3am
our cat
sees our duvet move
tries to bite
through
I twitch
he claws

we can’t be hurt

[Macavity]

Like the concept Tristan, though I'm getting tangled in that question mark.

Bw

Phil

[Firebird]

Hi Phil,

Pleased you like the concept. Don’t know how that question mark got there. It wasn’t meant to be there. Thanks for pointing out.

Cheers,

Tristan

[jisbell00]

Hi Tristan,

SHort and pithy, with a fine last line. You might put a space after 3: i first read the opening line as Jam!

Cheers,
John

[Namyh]

Firebird - I liked this. Sometimes we need a second skin in this world to remind us of our first one still there. Intriguing! Thanks for sharing Tristan. Namyh

[Firebird]

Thanks John and Namyh. Pleased you like this short.

Thanks for reading.

Cheers,

Tristan