The Sparrow (revised)

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Jim
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Mon Aug 08, 2022 10:11 pm

Thank you, Fliss. I like chirping too and will keep it.

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Tue Aug 09, 2022 8:24 pm

You're welcome, Jim. I really like this poem; there's something pleasantly understated about it, I think. I look forward to your next one :)

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