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Amadis
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courage from crocus
beyond cold loves equity
past springs shoots promise
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past springs shoots promise
roots delve the worm tickling earth
bulbs chuckle awake
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bulbs chuckle awake
fields be in gusty gaffaws
funny farm's calling
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funny farm's calling
Determined Deafness is best
listen to nature
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listen to nature
a sound to knock you sideways
lie still beneath Frīg
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lie still beneath Frīg
low cloud spun from the distaff
prophecy's white web
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prophecy's white web
Frigg has you pinned and entranced
Ovipositor.
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ovipositor
thrumming within nature's grip
continuation
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Continuation
the imperative life verb
sacred unbeing
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sacred unbeing
a shell of waves at the ear
tidal memory
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Tidal memory
an ebb and flow of present
and past and present
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and past and present
future ever-elusive
ever-affected
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Ever-affected
a display like flowers scent
never petrichor
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never petrichor
though the perfumer seeks it
bottled earthen rain
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bottled earthern rain
he pours into his gran's glass
tastes of peat, of home
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tastes of peat, of home
never taste again
buried with her now
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buried with her now
nine herbs and the wild rose
safe sleep of the sweet
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safe sleep of the sweet
humbugs stashed in my sock drawer
fuzzy midnight feast
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fuzzy midnight feast
across my neighbour's nice lawn
a full moon last night
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a full moon last night
I gobbled up the neighbours
a werewolf's lament
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