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Amadis
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come to mourn the dead
springs bloom infused with souls yearn
dried seeds float in space
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dried seeds float in space
a happy happenstance for
our shaman's story
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Our shaman's story
analog not digital
undissected dreams.
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undissected dreams
he pours into waking hours
and sleeps untroubled
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and sleeps untroubled
while the blood dries on his hands
sleep of innocents
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Sleep of innocents
is past, murdered. Let us now
mingle with the night.
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Mingle with the night
give the moon your eyes and bones
sleep inside the stars.
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sleep inside the stars
the sleep of a billion years
burst brilliant awake
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burst brilliant awake
do not trickle joy this day
money a mickle
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money a mickle
mac's a muckle. Fie good sir!
That gent's of Gwent bent.

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That gent's of Gwent bent
thought to deed. Bonny ribbons
thread the Wicker Man.
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Thread the wicker man
dance from this world to beyond
weave spirit made flesh
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weave spirit made flesh
let air inflame. Ashen waves
ghost sleepy refrains.
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