Rattle has just posted a poem which may have the most moving closing line of any poem I have ever read:
https://www.rattle.com/the-bar-headed-goose-by-devon-balwit/
Unfortunately, Balwit's meter and rhyme are shaky, but it is still a lovely poem.
The Bar-Headed Goose by Devon Balwit
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If you don't like the black theme, it is easy to switch to a lighter color. Just ask me how.
If I don't critique your poem, it is probably because I don't understand it.
If you don't like the black theme, it is easy to switch to a lighter color. Just ask me how.
If I don't critique your poem, it is probably because I don't understand it.