The Bar-Headed Goose by Devon Balwit

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Wed Sep 18, 2019 6:22 am

Rattle has just posted a poem which may have the most moving closing line of any poem I have ever read:

https://www.rattle.com/the-bar-headed-goose-by-devon-balwit/

Unfortunately, Balwit's meter and rhyme are shaky, but it is still a lovely poem.
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