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Re: A poem that I read today by Mac

Posted: Wed Dec 06, 2023 8:41 am
by jisbell00
Very nice! i like the leather skin at the end, which speaks to bookbinding, to my mind. :)

Cheers,
John

Re: A poem that I read today by Mac

Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2023 9:37 am
by nash
Thanks very much, Mac. That's really kind! Thanks, John!

Re: A poem that I read today by Mac

Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2023 1:01 pm
by Macavity

Re: A poem that I read today by Mac

Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2023 2:05 pm
by jisbell00
Brilliant. I'd forgotten Benjamin Zephaniah, thanks for reminding me.

Cheers,
John

Re: A poem that I read today by Mac

Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2023 3:12 pm
by Macavity
Sadly he passed away today John.

Re: A poem that I read today by Mac

Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2023 3:48 pm
by jisbell00
Oh, that was today. May he rest in peace. I saw from the article that he had died, but without a date.

Re: A poem that I read today by Mac

Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2023 11:54 am
by Macavity

Re: A poem that I read today by Mac

Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2023 12:13 pm
by jisbell00
Aargh. She is always scary. Here's a personal favorite: https://www.blueridgejournal.com/poems/sp-moon.htm

Cheers,
John

Re: A poem that I read today by Mac

Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2023 2:04 pm
by Macavity
I suspect the message of the pheasant poem was directed at TH. The message of the yew tree is 'blackness'. Indeed!

Re: A poem that I read today by Mac

Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2023 2:56 pm
by jisbell00
:)

People like TH -Heaney did The Rattle Bag with him - but I've not liked his work much since undergrad days. It seems very blustery to me - "terrifying are the sleek black thrushes on the lawn." No Ted, they're not. Plath OTOH is amazing, she doesn't need to beat her flanks into a lather to be scary.

Cheers,
John

Re: A poem that I read today by Mac

Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2023 3:40 pm
by Macavity
I know what you mean John, though I do like some of his poems:

https://allpoetry.com/Full-Moon-and-Little-Frieda

Re: A poem that I read today by Mac

Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2023 3:58 pm
by jisbell00
That is nice, isn't it? I especially like this: "A cool small evening shrunk to a dog bark and the clank of a bucket." That's poetry, that is. That's why I read the stuff!

Cheers,
John

Re: A poem that I read today by Mac

Posted: Tue Dec 12, 2023 9:47 am
by Macavity

Re: A poem that I read today by Mac

Posted: Fri Dec 15, 2023 1:14 am
by jisbell00

Re: A poem that I read today by Mac

Posted: Fri Dec 15, 2023 2:53 am
by Macavity

Re: A poem that I read today by Mac

Posted: Fri Dec 15, 2023 4:13 am
by jisbell00
Ah, that's where "We murder to dissect" comes from!

Cheers,
John

Re: A poem that I read today by Mac

Posted: Sat Dec 16, 2023 8:40 pm
by Macavity

Re: A poem that I read today by Mac

Posted: Sat Dec 16, 2023 9:19 pm
by jisbell00
She is good, isn't she? I also like this lady, though her poems tend to the long side: https://www.poetrynook.com/poem/jerboa

Cheers,
John

Re: A poem that I read today by Mac

Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2023 4:29 am
by Macavity

Re: A poem that I read today by Mac

Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2023 5:24 am
by jisbell00
Nice poem - I could 100% do without the white spaces! I think that would improve it.

Cheers,
John

Re: A poem that I read today by Mac

Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2023 9:07 am
by Macavity

Re: A poem that I read today by Mac

Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2023 9:52 am
by jisbell00
very nice. Lovely poem, great title.

Cheers,
John

Re: A poem that I read today by Mac

Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2024 6:34 pm
by Macavity

Re: A poem that I read today by Mac

Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2024 7:30 pm
by jisbell00
It's a lovely title too. And the tone is ... perfect IMO.

Cheers,
John

Re: A poem that I read today by Mac

Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2024 8:01 pm
by Macavity
Whiskey/waltzing - plays aptly