Hello,
My name is Julie. I'm new to this forum and new to poetry. I will try to improve as much as possible and would appreciate any help you could offer.
thank you
-Jules
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Julie,
Welcome to the forum. Glad to see Sarah's will for you to join us has prevailed. I will help where I can. In the meantime, your name always makes me remember this old Country song:
I’m not Lisa, My name is Julie.
Lisa left you years ago.
My eyes are not blue, but mine won’t leave you
‘Till the sunlight has touched your face.
She was your morning light,
Her smile told of no night.
Your love for her grew
With each rising sun.
And then one winter day,
His hand led her away.
She left you here drowning in your tears,
Here where you’ve stayed for years,
Crying Lisa, Lisa.
I’m not Lisa, My name is Julie.
Lisa left you years ago.
My eyes are not blue, but mine won’t leave you
‘Till the sunlight has touched your face.
I’m not Lisa.
--A.S.
Welcome to the forum. Glad to see Sarah's will for you to join us has prevailed. I will help where I can. In the meantime, your name always makes me remember this old Country song:
I’m not Lisa, My name is Julie.
Lisa left you years ago.
My eyes are not blue, but mine won’t leave you
‘Till the sunlight has touched your face.
She was your morning light,
Her smile told of no night.
Your love for her grew
With each rising sun.
And then one winter day,
His hand led her away.
She left you here drowning in your tears,
Here where you’ve stayed for years,
Crying Lisa, Lisa.
I’m not Lisa, My name is Julie.
Lisa left you years ago.
My eyes are not blue, but mine won’t leave you
‘Till the sunlight has touched your face.
I’m not Lisa.
--A.S.