Novel Train: Discussion

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Fri Apr 07, 2006 8:05 am

Following the (runaway) success of the haiku train (well done Caleb), I thought we could try to do something similar in the fiction section. It might turn into some kind of bizarre PG novel.

But how many words per person? 100 would be too many I think? Maybe 50 is also. 25?

Any thoughts.

Might be fun.

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Sat Apr 08, 2006 6:48 am

I'd go middle of the road with 50. A wonderful idea though....just need an idea to start us off...
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Sat Apr 08, 2006 8:33 am

OK we'll go with 50.

I'll knock up something later today.

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Sat Apr 08, 2006 7:43 pm

Nice one!
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Sun Apr 09, 2006 12:44 am

Pseud and I have sort of taken it and run, we are now at shop entrance!

Character needs establishing quick smart me thinks!

Pseud and I were also discussing the fact that tangents are inevitable, how can we make this a worthy project and not a fly by night sort of affair?

Communication perhaps. That may well null the flow, but tangents can be awful things.
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Sun Apr 09, 2006 1:28 pm

Perhaps we could introduce new threads as parallel universes.
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Sun Apr 09, 2006 2:22 pm

Ghost train you mean?

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PS Great start, by the way, Barrie - couldn't have thought of a better one myself. It gives us a blank-canvas-type character to work on.
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Sun Apr 09, 2006 6:32 pm

PS I've changed the wording at the head of the train to try and help people to understand what is required.

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Sun Apr 09, 2006 10:30 pm

What about another sticky called "Novel Train Commentary"? That way we can share ideas and get criticism as we go along...
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Sun Apr 09, 2006 10:53 pm

Whilst I agree with Cam's comment:

"Try not to go down cul-de-sacs. Remember that others have to follow on from what you write."

There is a possibility of the Novel becoming predictable, there should be some room for improvisation? That's what makes it fun!

Although obviously going off on wild tangents will make it disjointed, and perhaps unreadable, therefore Pseud your last suggestion sounds like good one.
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Mon Apr 10, 2006 12:03 am

When I said 'new threads', I meant when we get 'simultaneous' replies, we could start off the last as a new 'parallel' post, instead of ignoring the first, as happens in the haiku.

If we discuss it, then spontaneity is lost and it could become too contrived.

I suppose it all depends on the anticipated outcome of the exercise - Is there one? Is it just to let things flow or to hold onto the reins. Would a fifty word piece lead to an inescapable cul-de-sac anyway?

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Mon Apr 10, 2006 8:04 am

You make a very good point Kris. Holding tightly to the reins may make the novel predictable/dull. However, going off piste may cause it to fragment and fall apart. Therefore, we need a balance of the 2. Both angles can be accommodated, I'm sure.

Kris - you can be in charge of the surreal.

Cam

PS I've moved this into Prose Discussion so others can see what's going on.
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Tue Apr 11, 2006 12:47 pm

Stereo-typical German psychiatrist. Surely not?
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Wed Apr 12, 2006 10:29 am

Not a stereotype as such, rather schooled in dastardly Nazi mind-control technique - I was hoping for a sort of latter day Dick Barton type of thing - with links to past events.

Are we going down the serious path, or tongue-in-cheek serious (like your cockney Micky Mouser)?

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Wed Apr 12, 2006 3:10 pm

Perhaps we should go for tongue in cheek style? Might be more of a laugh.

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