Seven foot zero of nicotine-bearded Gandalf
is boarding the eight-eighteen again,
bemoaning (by Blackberry) his staff,
to his (Glasgow City) Council.
Fly, you fool.
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- Sun Jan 08, 2012 10:00 pm
- Forum: Poetry Exercises
- Topic: Small stones: an exercise for January
- Replies: 73
- Views: 32363
- Sun Oct 09, 2011 12:22 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Sign up here for a Duet!
- Replies: 66
- Views: 10974
Re: Sign up here for a Duet!
On holiday w/ limited mobile internet. Will check this out when I get home early nx week.
Thx
- N
Thx
- N
- Fri Sep 23, 2011 9:02 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Haiku Train
- Replies: 7773
- Views: 1481234
Re: Haiku Train
Acceptance tames time
unless you're a physicist --
chair to that lion
unless you're a physicist --
chair to that lion
- Fri Sep 23, 2011 8:22 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: British biscuit
- Replies: 3
- Views: 992
Re: British biscuit
Geoff, Brian. Thanks guys. I'm so far out of my writing-zone that your comments flatter me. Yes, "British" is one of those noun/adjectives that annoy me. There is no plural that works (unlike "Americans" or "Spaniards"), and "Britians" has that whole misplaced...
- Tue Sep 20, 2011 8:55 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: British biscuit
- Replies: 3
- Views: 992
British biscuit
Unusually for British, they exorcised restraint on the first date in the restaurant ........over grilled pig ........with citrus jus then later at the gig, and especially on the bus back to your her place. But we they woke to awakenings fights over bagels and baps cream cheese or bacon and flings ar...
- Sun Sep 11, 2011 1:15 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: 9/11 senryu
- Replies: 1
- Views: 805
9/11 senryu
once upon a time
much much longer than exactly ten years ago to the very day today
there were two towers
- Neil
much much longer than exactly ten years ago to the very day today
there were two towers
- Neil
- Sun Sep 11, 2011 12:56 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Haiku Train
- Replies: 7773
- Views: 1481234
Re: Haiku Train
"Let's get after them"
ten years have taught you fuck all,
xenophobia.
ten years have taught you fuck all,
xenophobia.
- Mon Aug 22, 2011 10:03 pm
- Forum: Any Other Business
- Topic: Drink Confessions: Did it Happen?
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2554
Re: Drink Confessions: Did it Happen?
I didn't know many people, and it was only a short-term job in Tesco. Not being native to the area, I stood out somewhat as a bumpkin, so the annual country-park BBQ seemed the perfect place to WF&IP. I decided to take my juggling equipment; beanbags, clubs, diabolo etc.. I hadn't deliberately p...
- Tue Aug 16, 2011 10:53 pm
- Forum: Post Visual Art
- Topic: Medium pencil exercise
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1526
Re: Medium pencil exercise
Nice work, Tim.
Great folds, shoulders & the hair is fab.
I'm with J on the arms though. The left arm seems a little short, but it's fingers are in better proportion.
Who is she? She pretty.
- Neil
Great folds, shoulders & the hair is fab.
I'm with J on the arms though. The left arm seems a little short, but it's fingers are in better proportion.
Who is she? She pretty.
- Neil
- Tue Aug 16, 2011 10:06 pm
- Forum: Music and Song Lyric Discussion
- Topic: Tony McManus: harmonics & fingerstyle
- Replies: 1
- Views: 657
- Tue Aug 16, 2011 9:34 pm
- Forum: Music and Song Lyric Discussion
- Topic: Richard Thompson - Oops I Did It Again
- Replies: 2
- Views: 850
- Tue Aug 16, 2011 9:27 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: necksnap
- Replies: 2
- Views: 935
necksnap
necksnap
trachea's best served al-dente
on crimson-white porcelain
forked with fine steel
welcome, chum
you're well prepared
plump forbidden fruit
napkin around your neck
we won't be needing those fava beans
trachea's best served al-dente
on crimson-white porcelain
forked with fine steel
welcome, chum
you're well prepared
plump forbidden fruit
napkin around your neck
we won't be needing those fava beans
- Tue Aug 16, 2011 6:48 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Giant leap
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2608
Re: Giant leap
Thanks, everyone. It's nice to come back to this one after a few months. I agree with everyone; S1 is the only bit worth saving. I remember what I was trying to do with S2, but it fails, badly. @champion: comments are never taken with offense, unless they're offensive :). Yours are useful, so thank ...
- Tue Aug 16, 2011 6:42 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: absinthe
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1687
Re: absinthe
yw
- Fri Aug 12, 2011 4:01 am
- Forum: Music and Song Lyric Discussion
- Topic: Err . . . best Albums Ever?
- Replies: 102
- Views: 11425
Re: Err . . . best Albums Ever?
Springsteen = spent singer
Just sayin' . . .
- Neil
Just sayin' . . .
- Neil
- Tue Aug 09, 2011 10:16 pm
- Forum: Music and Song Lyric Discussion
- Topic: Panic in the streets of London
- Replies: 19
- Views: 4192
Re: Panic in the streets of London
meh . . . this isn't a party-political issue IHMO. The street-Scot has felt shat-upon by various UK governments forever, but is too lazy to riot (the Mark Renton defense for apparent indifference). It's a social issue, more to do with some new-fangled 'right to riot', social-media-buzziness, and opp...
- Tue Aug 09, 2011 9:36 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Haiku Train
- Replies: 7773
- Views: 1481234
Re: Haiku Train
no handling goods please -
Metropolitan Police
would like a quick word . . .
Metropolitan Police
would like a quick word . . .
- Mon Aug 01, 2011 11:02 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Haiku Train
- Replies: 7773
- Views: 1481234
Re: Haiku Train
no July sunshine -
thirty one cloudless days from
Gaius Thurinus?
thirty one cloudless days from
Gaius Thurinus?
- Mon Aug 01, 2011 10:16 pm
- Forum: Hello, Good Evening and Welcome
- Topic: Hello everyone
- Replies: 9
- Views: 4527
Re: Hello everyone
Hey, Shirls. :lol: Okay, thanks for the welcome. Not sure If I'm qualified enough to give my thoughts and critique to the poetry already here but shall have a go. IMHO, anyone is qualified to crit anything (even if it's a one-liner). I've been inactive here for a bit, bit if you want to crit somethi...
- Mon Aug 01, 2011 9:27 pm
- Forum: Hello, Good Evening and Welcome
- Topic: Hello everyone
- Replies: 9
- Views: 4527
Re: Hello everyone
Hello Shirley. Step inside, love. Make yourself at home. Watch out, Shirley. He's a ladies man y'know. Some sort of international playboy. He'll be inviting you to his caravan in Buenos Aires next. Don't go! A friend. Wise words. Back in the day, David is rumoured to have mentored The Hef. Having s...
- Thu Jul 28, 2011 11:07 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Ghost Syllables
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2198
Re: Ghost Syllables
Just my thoughts though, I could well be completely wrong ( I probably am, David likes it and he's dead clever). Yeah, that's right. And I'm an international playboy too. Indeed . . . The Pappz follow David from the crown-bowling greens of Ramsey to tin-bath racing in Castletown to F1 horse-tram ra...
- Thu Jul 28, 2011 10:55 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: absinthe
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1687
Re: absinthe
Hi, Gavin. L1 is a beaut. It draws me in, and is not let down by L2. Nice work L3 has "meditation", which I want to read as "medication". Clever if you meant it ;). L4-6 don't live up to their younger siblings I'm afraid. In L7, I don't understand the hyphen - sorry. It's gets in...
- Thu Jul 28, 2011 10:43 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Haiku Train
- Replies: 7773
- Views: 1481234
Re: Haiku Train
basement compiler -
led zep t-shirt, doc martens
no July sunshine
led zep t-shirt, doc martens
no July sunshine
- Thu Jul 28, 2011 10:40 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Snap!
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1219
Re: Snap!
Hey, Tim. Nice to read your stuff again. I like the contrast betwwen the first2/last2 (his moment) with the middle (her moment). Nice timing too in there. And a nice shape to reflect it all. I might be tempted to make the modifiers/references in the middle 6 lines a touch more feminine (whatever tha...
- Thu Jul 21, 2011 11:02 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Take The Spiral Staircase Down To The Mortuary
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1149
Re: Take The Spiral Staircase Down To The Mortuary
Hey, Jonny. I'm sorry I don't have time for a full crit of this, but it deserves a few quick comments. "golden toffee hammer" is really nice off the tounge. "Before its prime": cliché? "Under the weight of an unknown fate Where the air smells like the distant conscience Of a...