Thanks for the positive responses, folks.
Barrie - I wish I'd thought of using "emetic".....
Caleb - you are spot on.
The last verse, with hindsight, is a bit OTT
and also clumsy.
Maybe I'll split it into two verses......
Cheers
Geoff
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- Wed Dec 28, 2005 10:09 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Ode to an Odious Ad
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- Fri Dec 23, 2005 12:33 pm
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Ode to an Odious Ad
This isn't just an ode - This is a gourmet ode Conceived on a Flight of Fancy in a hot-air balloon ,one afternoon, over the sun-kissed shores of Grand Cayman in a brainstorm by exhilirated, inebriated ad-men These are not just verses - These are expansive verses written with quills from organically-...
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- Wed Dec 21, 2005 11:09 am
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Xmas staggers on
The embers of the dying year expire Excess time to kill in exile with the tribe before the winter fire fake as the foil tree Excited kids expected and received exorbitantly expensive gifts extorted on pain of tantrum but all too soon are bored and spill into the kitchen almost bringing to a standsti...
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Xmas Eve 1599
As I steered homewards through the snow at Yuletide's Eve, and having quaffed my fill at Ye Boar's Head, of ale and scotch was I accosted by Olde Bill "Hail fellow and well met!" I cried "Hast thou been drinking, knave?" replied the Sergeant of the Watch "Step forth now from...
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- Fri Dec 16, 2005 12:05 pm
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- Topic: Xmas Eve, 1599
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Xmas Eve, 1599
As I steered homewards through the snow at Yuletide's Eve, and having quaffed my fill at Ye Boar's Head, of ale and scotch was I accosted by Olde Bill "Hail fellow and well met!" I cried "Hast thou been drinking, knave?" replied the Sergeant of the Watch "Step forth now from...
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- Topic: George Best - In Gratitude
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I hope this is an improvement: George Best - In gratitude --------------------------------- Off the pitch He burned the Roman candle at both ends. On it He was a November rocket. His flair was stellar - Once glimpsed Imprinted forever on the film of memory Replay it now - Crowd hush as he spins into...
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- Fri Dec 09, 2005 12:43 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: George Best - In Gratitude
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George Best - In Gratitude
George Best - In Gratitude Off the pitch He burned the candle at both ends. On it He was a November rocket. His flair was stellar, Once glimpsed Imprinted forever on the film of memory Replay it now - Crowd hush as he turns on a sixpence accelerating away for all he's worth. Adrenalin rush. Watch hi...
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The Reluctant Goalkeeper
The Reluctant Goalkeeper ______________________ “Why must I be in goal?” said the goalie “Just standing in front of this net?” “Their number “8” can’t kick the ball straight” “I’ve not had a shot to save yet!” “Why must I be in goal?” said the goalie “It hurts when I dive on the ground.” “These glov...