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I am alone and need friends Someone please help me. I am alone in this world and without you my lovers where would i be in the smallest pockets of sky, white clouds race past me. I am alone and need companionship And where there’s feelings attached to you my lovers. I am alone and need friends Where...

Interesting poem, i find the cadence and the repetition to be refreshing, good poem.

Hey I am new here to poetry graves I've been writing poetry for about 3 years professionally and I am here for some critiques here and there. Also I write novels too but I am starting to get my bearings lately with poetry. As I prefer to write poetry than novels, anyway is there anyone else that is ...

I liked the last two lines, it had this cadence that sounded serene.

I liked the poem, the imagery was on point.

Oh ok thanks for your critique my friend.

There was a swan in the water And it was beautifully dressed. And there was a brilliant China white wing fluttering to the foaming blue lake And there from the shadows was a little hawk descending down below. And I see the bird flying and dancing with the swan I see the earth and the bird but this b...

His extraordinary what? What about it? I wish there was more you added here. Anyway I liked the poem, it was interesting.