Poetry Forum

New here, so apologise in advance for my nonsense. I loved the fact that I could smell your poem, the coffee, the wood, even the room with the waiting sheet of paper, it made me part of it. Sense of smell so very important!! Never known that induced in quite this way.

I'm new here so bear with me, I loved the feel of this and the flow if it, but not throughout. In part in it felt a little forced, which was a shame. I've no idea where I stand on the importance of rhyme (part of the reason I'm here is to find out), but there are parts of this poem which are a littl...