Really like this one Phil. Some of your best work I think. Love the sound of ‘into pelagic light’.
Many congrats.
Cheers,
Tristan
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- Thu Apr 11, 2024 5:05 pm
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: Black Nore Review
- Replies: 9
- Views: 96
- Mon Apr 08, 2024 7:30 am
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: The Seventh Quarry (1)
- Replies: 6
- Views: 116
Re: The Seventh Quarry (1)
Many congrats Phil. Love the word ‘Mumpsimus’ and how it came into being. Fantastic find.
Thoroughly enjoyed the poem.
Cheers,
Tristan
Thoroughly enjoyed the poem.
Cheers,
Tristan
- Mon Apr 08, 2024 7:22 am
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: Byways (Arachne Press)
- Replies: 6
- Views: 105
Re: Byways (Arachne Press)
Many congrats Phil. The book looks lovely. A well deserved inclusion, I’m sure.
Cheers,
Tristan
Cheers,
Tristan
- Mon Apr 08, 2024 7:19 am
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: In The Ekphrastic Review
- Replies: 6
- Views: 76
Re: In The Ekphrastic Review
Many congrats John. Much enjoyed.
Cheers,
Tristan
Cheers,
Tristan
- Sat Feb 17, 2024 11:21 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Spirit World
- Replies: 12
- Views: 138
Re: Spirit World
Hi John,
I really enjoyed this. The imagery is great. The poem made me think of Bruce Chatwin’s ‘Songlines’.
Maybe you slip a little into cliche here: ‘like some thief in the night’.
A very interesting poem. I’ll think more about it.
Cheers,
Tristan
I really enjoyed this. The imagery is great. The poem made me think of Bruce Chatwin’s ‘Songlines’.
Maybe you slip a little into cliche here: ‘like some thief in the night’.
A very interesting poem. I’ll think more about it.
Cheers,
Tristan
- Wed Feb 07, 2024 8:00 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: The Punishment of Marsyas
- Replies: 4
- Views: 267
Re: The Punishment of Marsyas
Hi John, These lines are both excellent and horrifying. Now, the easy hand that plucks the lyre, the drinking cup, the bow, peels Marsyas the way one peels a fruit. I have to admit my ignorance of Marsyas’s and Apollo’s story, but wiki soon put this right. Enjoyed the poem and researching its mythol...
- Sat Feb 03, 2024 6:17 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: A Good Day for God
- Replies: 11
- Views: 413
Re: A Good Day for God
I like the idea that possibly God having a good day and singing somehow set all the planets, galaxies and electrons in motion. Enjoyed the poem John. It has your usual easy readability in terms of fluidity and flow, but not necessarily in terms understanding of meaning.
Nice poem.
Cheers,
Tristan
Nice poem.
Cheers,
Tristan
- Mon Jan 22, 2024 8:44 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: A Crop Has Taken Root
- Replies: 4
- Views: 367
Re: A Crop Has Taken Root
Hi John,
I like this poem. I read it out aloud and liked its rhythm. Highlights for me are: ‘from the long / descent to evening’ and ‘a spark /leaps from a cathode’.
Lots more to like, too, of course.
Much enjoyed.
Cheers,
Tristan
I like this poem. I read it out aloud and liked its rhythm. Highlights for me are: ‘from the long / descent to evening’ and ‘a spark /leaps from a cathode’.
Lots more to like, too, of course.
Much enjoyed.
Cheers,
Tristan
- Sat Jan 20, 2024 5:22 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Even Better than the Real Thing
- Replies: 4
- Views: 434
Re: Even Better than the Real Thing
Hi John, When I read this I thought it was a parody, but then I read your comments to Phil and found out it was your reaction to the popularity demotic language in poetry. I fully agree with your viewpoint, but I’m not sure this is the best way of expressing it. Of course, you are right, the registe...
- Tue Dec 12, 2023 12:19 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: He is taken in for his appointment
- Replies: 12
- Views: 347
Re: He is taken in for his appointment
Nicely done David. As others have said, this poem gently sings. Thoroughly enjoyed.
If this poem is written from personal experience, I hope you have recovered.
Cheers,
Tristan
If this poem is written from personal experience, I hope you have recovered.
Cheers,
Tristan
- Sat Dec 09, 2023 9:46 am
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: John, Fliss, Ray, David, and Tristan
- Replies: 10
- Views: 528
Re: John, Fliss, Ray, David, and Tristan
Pleased you enjoyed it John, and liked that sentence. I can understand why poets enter comps, but for me they are a waste of money when I could be buying a po mag or book. I’ve been reading through the latest edition of Long Poem Magazine and there’s so many interesting things people are doing in po...
- Fri Dec 08, 2023 6:04 pm
- Forum: Forum News and Support
- Topic: Renewal Time!
- Replies: 9
- Views: 721
Re: Renewal Time!
Made a contribution yesterday.
Cheers all,
Tristan
Cheers all,
Tristan
- Sun Dec 03, 2023 11:44 am
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: John, Fliss, Ray, David, and Tristan
- Replies: 10
- Views: 528
Re: John, Fliss, Ray, David, and Tristan
Hi Phil, I have to confess that I have entered po comps in the past but not for a long time. Pleased you found it convincing. But as you imply, you’d already come to the pieces conclusions. Hi Fliss, Pleased you enjoyed the piece. Po comps are definitely better when there are no entry fees involved....
- Sat Dec 02, 2023 9:23 am
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: John, Fliss, Ray, David, and Tristan
- Replies: 10
- Views: 528
Re: John, Fliss, Ray, David, and Tristan
Many thanks Mac and Celeb. Many congrats to David, Fliss, Ray and John! Excellent poems all round.
If anyone is interested I’ve had a short essay published in Litter Magazine about poetry competitions (https://www.littermagazine.com/2023/11/ ... oetry.html).
Cheers,
Tristan
If anyone is interested I’ve had a short essay published in Litter Magazine about poetry competitions (https://www.littermagazine.com/2023/11/ ... oetry.html).
Cheers,
Tristan
- Sun Sep 24, 2023 9:15 pm
- Forum: Forum News and Support
- Topic: Future of the Forum?
- Replies: 38
- Views: 1671
Re: Future of the Forum?
I’ll wait too for the October post.
Hope you are doing well Kris.
Cheers,
Tristan
Hope you are doing well Kris.
Cheers,
Tristan
- Fri Sep 22, 2023 5:10 pm
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: Streetcake (1)
- Replies: 9
- Views: 422
Re: Streetcake (1)
Hi Phil,
I enjoyed this poem a great deal. It implies much about communication for me. Great image.
Cheers,
Tristan
I enjoyed this poem a great deal. It implies much about communication for me. Great image.
Cheers,
Tristan
- Mon Aug 07, 2023 6:26 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Dead Reckoning
- Replies: 2
- Views: 147
Re: Dead Reckoning
Hi John, I enjoyed this retelling of Shackleton’s incredible journey and eventual rescue of his men, and all those ‘might bes’. I also liked the ‘Dead Reckoning’ idea as their method of navigation and that it can lead to an accumulation of errors as in the recounting of stories - clever stuff. Enjoy...
- Mon Jul 03, 2023 1:38 pm
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: Snakeskin 308 July
- Replies: 12
- Views: 498
Re: Snakeskin 308 July
Hi David,
Not to worry at all. Pleased you liked the poems.
Cheers,
Tristan
Not to worry at all. Pleased you liked the poems.
Cheers,
Tristan
- Sun Jul 02, 2023 6:21 pm
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: Snakeskin 308 July
- Replies: 12
- Views: 498
Re: Snakeskin 308 July
Many thanks all and congrats to Michael. Much enjoyed your poem.
Cheers,
Tristan
Cheers,
Tristan
- Wed Jun 21, 2023 8:08 pm
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: The Ekphrastic Review
- Replies: 19
- Views: 1297
Re: The Ekphrastic Review
Many congrats Fliss! I read this on Twitter and enjoyed it then and am still enjoying it.
Cheers,
Tristan
Cheers,
Tristan
- Wed Jun 21, 2023 8:07 pm
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: CalebPerry is in One Sentence Poems
- Replies: 11
- Views: 439
Re: CalebPerry is in One Sentence Poems
Many congrats Celeb. Enjoyed your poem.
Cheers,
Tristan
Cheers,
Tristan
- Fri May 26, 2023 7:56 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Perfectly Imperfect (Revised)
- Replies: 20
- Views: 747
Re: Perfectly Imperfect (Revised)
Hi Morpheus, I like this and think it works very well. I’m not sure I agree with Phil about swapping ‘fuck it’ for ‘sod it’. I like the harshness of ‘fuck it’. I also think your move from first person to third person viewpoint in you second version adds an element of humour to the end of the poem, w...
- Fri May 26, 2023 7:43 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: A Glass of Water
- Replies: 5
- Views: 363
Re: A Glass of Water
Hi John,
Yes, this is a lovely poem. A pleasure to read.
Cheers,
Tristan
Yes, this is a lovely poem. A pleasure to read.
I’m sure I’ve read this image before in another one of your poems. It’s a cracker. Works so well.…The birds / knot and unknot …
Cheers,
Tristan
- Tue May 09, 2023 6:14 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: AI
- Replies: 27
- Views: 1800
Re: AI
Hi David, Read this a number of times and what mostly comes across for me is a sense of disconnect and apathy (maybe this is a political poem?). Maybe what you are describing in some way is the state of play now. I would like a few more clues if this poem is meant to hint at more or something else. ...
- Tue May 09, 2023 5:58 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Prayer For The Tender Greens (Revised)
- Replies: 18
- Views: 786
Re: Prayer For The Tender Greens (Revised)
Hi Morpheus,
I enjoyed this - the rhymes and your well weighted lines. It’s good fun.
Nice poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Cheers,
Tristan
I enjoyed this - the rhymes and your well weighted lines. It’s good fun.
This made me smile.who goes ahead and pulls the plug?
Slime’s reaper boy: the slug.
Nice poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Cheers,
Tristan