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- Mon Aug 21, 2006 11:21 pm
- Forum: Music and Song Lyric Discussion
- Topic: Songwriters who make you want to write
- Replies: 22
- Views: 8347
- Mon Aug 21, 2006 10:53 pm
- Forum: Post Some Prose
- Topic: Honeytrap
- Replies: 4
- Views: 3292
- Sun Aug 20, 2006 6:07 pm
- Forum: Post Some Prose
- Topic: Punctured Perceptions Pt.2
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2892
- Sun Aug 20, 2006 3:47 pm
- Forum: Post Some Prose
- Topic: Honeytrap
- Replies: 4
- Views: 3292
Honeytrap
Smoke cascading from her mouth, mist over a mountain, falling and twisting. Glittering green eyes, dew on pasture, soft and glistening. Cute little nose, Christmas and kittens, twitching and smiling. I was in a nightclub though. Hard walls and right-angles, sitting on the concrete stairs. Leaning ag...
- Sun Aug 20, 2006 2:30 pm
- Forum: Post Some Prose
- Topic: Inside Insanity
- Replies: 6
- Views: 4413
- Sat Aug 19, 2006 9:49 pm
- Forum: Post Some Prose
- Topic: Posted
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1719
- Sat Aug 19, 2006 9:45 pm
- Forum: Post Some Prose
- Topic: Leb Dimz
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2196
- Sat Aug 19, 2006 9:44 pm
- Forum: Post Some Prose
- Topic: The Zorbs, after The Letter
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2207
- Sat Aug 19, 2006 9:29 pm
- Forum: Post Some Prose
- Topic: Inside Insanity
- Replies: 6
- Views: 4413
Yeah, well it's really useful and nice to have a place like this. I don't really have much idea how to write at the moment, so it's good to have somewhere to be able to exhibit peices without fear of extremely harsh criticism or silly loved-up pretense. The atmosphere on this site is probably just a...
- Sat Aug 19, 2006 12:26 pm
- Forum: Post Some Prose
- Topic: Inside Insanity
- Replies: 6
- Views: 4413
Inside Insanity
My rancid flat/squat overlooks King Street, which for those not familiar with London is the main thoroughfare running between Westminster and the Benson & Hedges-chic pramlands of the Southwest. A lot of political marches go up there: hippy-chic wannabes, housewives and 15-year old students bunk...
- Sat Aug 19, 2006 12:01 pm
- Forum: Post Some Prose
- Topic: Novel Writing Train - help tell Harry's story!
- Replies: 52
- Views: 61934
Herr Doktor ran for a moment on the spot, blinded by adrenaline to the fact that monsterous Lo Fat had grabbed hold of his clothing. But now he tried for an even more effortsome break from the room, this time motivated by fear rather than oppurtunism. His shirt ripped loudly from his back, revealing...
- Sat Aug 19, 2006 11:42 am
- Forum: Post Some Prose
- Topic: untitled story. needs critque
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2521
- Fri Aug 18, 2006 4:33 pm
- Forum: Post Some Prose
- Topic: Untitled Ting [sic]
- Replies: 0
- Views: 1430
Untitled Ting [sic]
Most people would see my life as a one-way trip into the sickness, and hold the belief that the scene of my death will be somewhere in the vicinity of a red-brown needle, but then, most people aren’t particularly wise. I’d disagree, anyway, but maybe my protestations are naïve. I love people, but we...
- Wed Sep 14, 2005 7:59 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Pork Girl
- Replies: 14
- Views: 4804
You think you can only show me what IS poetry. You fail to recognise that a thing is as much what it is as what it isn't. Show me what isn't poetry. Only when we know what is too much can we know what is enough, to quote a poet, heh. The developments in most western culture and society have past me ...
- Wed Sep 14, 2005 4:49 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Pork Girl
- Replies: 14
- Views: 4804
- Wed Sep 14, 2005 2:40 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Seen It All.
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1490
- Wed Sep 14, 2005 12:50 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Pork Girl
- Replies: 14
- Views: 4804
- Wed Sep 14, 2005 10:58 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Pork Girl
- Replies: 14
- Views: 4804
- Wed Sep 14, 2005 3:29 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Pork Girl
- Replies: 14
- Views: 4804
I don't understand the difference between this stanza and prose broken up into lines and capitalised. Wafting maybe of rotten cabbage now, She moves her mass like marshmallow, Indifferent to stares and concealed giggles. Wafting maybe of rotten cabbage now, she moves her mass like marshmallow, indif...
- Wed Sep 14, 2005 3:26 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Soppy Fir Tree Frame
- Replies: 15
- Views: 4065
Yeah, true. Apologies are in order for my use of hyperbole, but if you contextualise the comment makes sense. The thing is, the entire forum baffles me to a greater or less extent, for two reasons which I can discern, and to apply them to single poems seems trolling-behaviour. Still, I am willing, a...
- Wed Sep 14, 2005 2:51 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Soppy Fir Tree Frame
- Replies: 15
- Views: 4065
- Wed Sep 14, 2005 2:50 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Soppy Fir Tree Frame
- Replies: 15
- Views: 4065
What I wrote wasn't in a self-pitying tone. It was just a (mistaken) reaction to the (as-I-thought-at-the-time) accusation: Now another bit of mish-mashing that is no doubt going to get more attention than my last 10 poems combined. Of course, I didn't understand the context of that sentence, so it ...
- Tue Sep 13, 2005 7:40 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Soppy Fir Tree Frame
- Replies: 15
- Views: 4065
- Tue Sep 13, 2005 7:32 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Soppy Fir Tree Frame
- Replies: 15
- Views: 4065
- Tue Sep 13, 2005 7:29 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Goodbye Forever!
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1423