Well done Jane. Very much enjoyed.
All the best Kev
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- Thu Aug 06, 2015 3:59 pm
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: Congrats to the Magpie/Three Drops1
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2231
- Thu Aug 06, 2015 3:55 pm
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: Dactyl/1
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2387
Re: Dactyl/1
Well done Seth and Mac. I tried the link but was not able to find your poems.
Was keen to have a read.
All the best
Kev
Was keen to have a read.
All the best
Kev
- Thu Aug 06, 2015 3:45 pm
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: The Stare's Nest (1)
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2785
Re: The Stare's Nest (1)
Excellent work Mac. Well done.
Kev
Kev
- Wed Aug 05, 2015 5:34 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Breaktime (revision)
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3835
Re: Breaktime (revision)
Hi Mac
You're fast becoming a master of these shorter poems.
I picture this scene very clearly and like the addition of Holm oak and levellers lane.
All the best Kev
You're fast becoming a master of these shorter poems.
I picture this scene very clearly and like the addition of Holm oak and levellers lane.
All the best Kev
- Mon Jun 29, 2015 4:57 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Haiku Train
- Replies: 7773
- Views: 1479764
Re: Haiku Train
The natural flow
Interrupted by a dam
Hydroelectric
Interrupted by a dam
Hydroelectric
- Sat Jun 27, 2015 4:48 am
- Forum: Poetry Exercises
- Topic: New Challenge
- Replies: 24
- Views: 23954
Re: New Challenge
Have been struggling with this one Jane. But hope to have something soon.
- Fri Jun 26, 2015 9:49 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Group Therapy
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3892
Re: Group Therapy
Excellent work Ray. Enjoyed the rhymes
All the best Kev
All the best Kev
- Fri Jun 26, 2015 9:33 am
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: Congrats to Ray/Clear Poetry2
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2983
Re: Congrats to Ray/Clear Poetry2
Well done again Ray.
Kev
Kev
- Fri Jun 26, 2015 9:28 am
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: Congrats Ray - The Recusant
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2388
Re: Congrats Ray - The Recusant
Excellent work Ray. Well done.
All the best Kev
All the best Kev
- Thu Jun 18, 2015 4:21 pm
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: Three Drops From a Cauldron1
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2908
Re: Three Drops From a Cauldron1
Good one Seth. Much enjoyed.
All the best Kev
All the best Kev
- Thu Jun 18, 2015 4:10 pm
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: Sein und Werden (1)
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3502
Re: Sein und Werden (1)
Well done Mac. Love the poem.
All the best
Kev
All the best
Kev
- Sun Jun 14, 2015 10:19 am
- Forum: Poetry Exercises
- Topic: New Challenge
- Replies: 24
- Views: 23954
Re: New Challenge
That's a cracker Jane.
Kev
Kev
- Mon Jun 01, 2015 7:59 pm
- Forum: Poetry Exercises
- Topic: New Challenge
- Replies: 24
- Views: 23954
Re: New Challenge
Will have a go at this I think.
- Mon Jun 01, 2015 7:46 pm
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: Streetcake Magazine
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2552
Re: Streetcake Magazine
Love this poem MJ. Lots of interesting and curious images (banana game, the electric scorpion...).
All the best Kev
All the best Kev
- Mon Jun 01, 2015 7:26 pm
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: Jellyfish Whispers
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3126
Re: Jellyfish Whispers
Three good one's Mac. See what you mean about bite.
All the best Kev
All the best Kev
- Mon Jun 01, 2015 7:20 pm
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: Three Drops from a Cauldron
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3637
Re: Three Drops from a Cauldron
Well done all.
All the best Kev
All the best Kev
- Fri May 22, 2015 5:59 pm
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: Shadowtrain
- Replies: 14
- Views: 4156
Re: Shadowtrain
Well done Tristan.
All the best
Kev
All the best
Kev
- Fri May 22, 2015 5:48 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Brindleyplace
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2940
Re: Brindleyplace
Thanks Mac.
Am working on the rewrite as we speak. See what you mean about myriad, but am struggling to come up with an alternative. Suggestions welcome.
Kev
Am working on the rewrite as we speak. See what you mean about myriad, but am struggling to come up with an alternative. Suggestions welcome.
Kev
- Sat May 16, 2015 5:14 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Brindleyplace
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2940
Re: Brindleyplace
Thanks all for the encouraging comments.
Ah! I now see what you mean by pre-loading.
Need to change that for sure.
Thanks for all the suggestions. Will ponder over the weekend with a view to posting a revision soon.
All the best
Kev
Ah! I now see what you mean by pre-loading.
Need to change that for sure.
Thanks for all the suggestions. Will ponder over the weekend with a view to posting a revision soon.
All the best
Kev
- Fri May 15, 2015 6:46 pm
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: poetandgeek (2)
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2995
Re: poetandgeek (2)
excellent double Mac. Well done.
Kev
Kev
- Fri May 15, 2015 6:43 pm
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: Longest Acceptance Wait Ever/1
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2455
Re: Longest Acceptance Wait Ever/1
Well done Seth. No I can't beat that. Like Mac I have a couple of non responses. Just goes to show you should never give up hope.
All the best Kev
All the best Kev
- Fri May 15, 2015 6:38 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Haiku Train
- Replies: 7773
- Views: 1479764
Re: Haiku Train
London drum'n'bass
quite a hot rhythm section
dancing to the beat
quite a hot rhythm section
dancing to the beat
- Fri May 15, 2015 6:32 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Brindleyplace
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2940
Brindleyplace
Revision 1 George (the breakfast barge) is long since closed. His dark, leviathan hull reflects in the mirror smooth waters of the cold canal. Above him, on the footbridge, revellers ebb and flow, in and out of the numerous bars and restaurants, acclimatising themselves, pre-loaded for the long nig...
- Fri May 15, 2015 6:28 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Breaking the Bough (V5 much revised)
- Replies: 17
- Views: 4537
Re: Breaking the Bough (Less trite more bite remix)
There's much to admire here Mark. Some nice rhymes, has good rhythm. Think your getting there, has potential I'd say.
Should that be "the mirror before me instead of my. Just a thought.
All the best Kev
Should that be "the mirror before me instead of my. Just a thought.
All the best Kev
- Fri May 15, 2015 6:16 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: It’s Complicated
- Replies: 8
- Views: 3182
Re: It’s Complicated
I found the bi, bi-polar bear, bonnie and clyde jekyl and hyde thing very interesting as a metaphor for multiple personalities.
Think Ray hit it on the head really
All the best Kev
Think Ray hit it on the head really
All the best Kev